110 writing exercises already! Time sure flew by fast.
This week I was prompted by a member of the Dead Pete Society, but it took me all week to complete the prompt. Here it is:
2018/01/21 – Write about someone you hate who is in love with you
On a remote island, far from any civilisation, there lived a savage
tribe. Their village was situated at the shore, a neat cluster of
stilt houses. Most of the inhabitants were fishermen. Every morning
they sailed with their little cockleshells to the nearby reef to
fish. Zath was one of them. Even before sunrise he would get up, load
his net and sail to his favourite fishing spot.
But he was not alone there. Every day he would try to outdo his
neighbour Leann as they squabbled over who caught the biggest or most
fish. Their rivalry dated to their youth, and they hated each other
with a passion. Not one day passed when they wouldn't at least throw
insults. It hadn't always been like that. Zath remembered a time when
they had played together as kids, when they were inseparable and the
best of friends. But somewhere sometime something had gone terribly
awry. Yet Zath couldn't even remember the trigger incident of their
broken friendship. He wondered if Leann did. But it mattered not.
There was no way back now. Their fronts were hardened, their words
bitter and spiteful.
But they wouldn't go as far as messing with their boats or nets; they
were honourable fishermen. So Zath trusted Leann when he suddenly
shouted: “Sharks! Pull in your net!” And while he hauled in the
load of thrashing fish he heard a splash. Zath turned around. Leann's
boat rocked back and forth on the waves. But where was Leann?
A shadow glided beneath Zath's boat. Without a second thought Zath
grabbed his spear and jumped into the cool water, dove and searched
for Leann. He saw three sharks lurking about and circling, and
between them there drifted his rival. With two, three strong strokes
Zath hurried there and thrust his spear at the sharks to shoo them
away from Leann's body. A cloud of red surrounded the body and Zath
didn't know how much longer he could fend off the sharks. He had to
get the both of them out of there immediately! So he grabbed Leann by
the midriff and dragged him to the surface, where he perceive the
hulk of his boat. And once they broke through the surface and Zath
drew in huge gulps of air he hauled Leann's body into his boat then
climbed after him. Panting hard he lay on the planks. Then he
remembered the blood.
“Leann! You alright?” He heaved himself up and examined the body.
There was so much blood and Zath could see Leann had several bite
marks; chunks of meat were missing. “Leann! Stay with me. I'll get
you to our shaman as fast as I can,” he promised and was about to
trim the sail when Leann grabbed his arm and groaned. “Zath,” he
rasped, “never mind. We're too far out, aren't we? You won't make
it… I… won't make it.” Zath shook his head, looked back to the
small black dots at the horizon where their village lay. Leann was
probably right, but he didn't want to acknowledge that.
Leann tugged at his arm until he grasped his hand and squeezed it.
“Listen, man, let me...let me say this at least for once in my
life,” Leann murmured laboriously, “you know, I never really
hated you, Zath. The truth is… the truth is I love you. Always
have.” Zath's eyes went wide with disbelief. “What?!” he
exclaimed. This couldn't be true, could it? Zath was shocked. Leann
closed his eyes, smiling, never to open them again.
As Zath sailed home as fast as he could, the body of his rival tucked
between the planks and the net full of fish, his mind was in utter
turmoil. There was so much left unsaid, so much said which couldn't
be undone. But most of all he was upset and confused by Leann's last
words. For years he'd thought Leann hated him. Yet, whatever he would
have answered if he ever figured out what he felt for his rival, his
long lost friend, it would remain unheard. And there would hardly be
any closure to the rift between them.