Writing Exercise 038

The last writing exercise of this month. But don't worry, there will be more next month. ;)
This time I had to write an epilogue to a book, movie or game. And since my book in the making hasn't got one yet, I chose 'Ravenous Adventures -- A Tale from Neverbeen Universe'. This epilogue also hints at another WIP I'm currently working on.
Enjoy. :D

2016/08/30 – write an epilogue to a book/movie/game (Ravenous Adventures)

Darkness. Utter darkness. It engulfed them completely as they trudged through the deepest of jungles. Two pale moons were up by now, tingeing the cloudy night sky in dark shades of blue and green. But it was not enough to see more than shadows amongst shadows. The air was hot and humid.

“I wish I still had Trébol's dagger,” Gene mused aloud as he stumbled through the gnarled thicket. The heavenly steel would at least have given off enough light to perceive where he was going. He was reminded of the horrible forest they had crossed at the beginning of their adventure. Despite the heat he shuddered.

“Where's it got to anyways?” Raphael asked, vaulting over an uprooted mangrove. Gene awkwardly climbed after him.

“Eh… I lost it back in the past,” he admitted and tried to close up on the Daemon, who had no problems seeing in the dark. Gene didn't want to get lost here.

“So it's just as gone as the Timechrystal. Pity,” Raphael concluded and took Gene's hand as the human struggled forward with outstretched hands. Gene sighed, relieved, and let himself be navigated through the jungle. He still occasionally stumbled over roots, but he felt much more safe when Raphael's warm hand lay in his and he led the way.

“Eh...why are we walking this hell again?” Gene wondered.

“Strictly speaking, the sixth Pandemonium is only a part of Hell. But I get you,” Raphael answered, “Since we can't stay at Lucifer's castle – well, actually, we could, but the 'Old Grump' wouldn't want us to – we have to find a place for us. But don't mind. There are seven Pandemoniae, so we should be able to do just that. You didn't like either the sand desert nor the ice desert, so I thought we'd try something different. And here we are.” He probably made a wide gesture but Gene couldn't see. “I must admit, I like it here. There are volcanoes and this jungle to explore, and the darkness agrees with me. The views are beautiful,” Raphael grinned.

“I can't see a thing,” Gene huffed and peered into the darkness. He wiped beads of sweat off his brow and sighed.

“Sorry,” his lover said. “Let's camp on that monticule. You'll be able to see more out in the open and with a campfire,” he promised and led Gene up the rise. Raphael was right. As soon as the flames cackled and cracked Gene felt much more comfortable. He could only see a small perimeter but the fire gave off a soothing light. And when Raphael cooked one of his hyperdelicious meals everything was okay again. Even the thought of not being able to return to Thisside was not as scary anymore.

'Do you miss Earth much?' Raphael linked their minds.

“I haven't had the time to miss my family. Just so much had happened so fast,” Gene admitted and sighed. “But now that you speak of it, I do.”

Raphael's mental presence surrounded him like a hug. “I'm sorry we have to stay on the Otherside. I don't even know why I still exist. When I gave my soul to save your life that should've been it. I'm not of the reincarnating kind.”

Gene's heart clenched at the thought of almost losing Raphael for good. He grabbed the older man's hand and squeezed it. “Don't you scare me again like that. I really thought I'd lost you,” his voice quivered and a heavy lump formed in his throat.

But the Daemon slightly smiled and kissed him. 'But you wished me back,' he telepathically whispered. Gene sighed into the kiss, relieved. They were together again, alive and kicking – well, not exactly alive, but it felt just like they were. Gene could get used to being undead. And he was just glad that Raphael was with him. He would go anywhere as long as they stayed together, even stay in this Pandemonium of darkness.

“Tell me about this place,” he was curious. Gene was sure Raphael had followed his thoughts.

Raphael nodded. “Alright. As I already mentioned, this Pandemonium is a world of volcanoes and jungles; it is a world of eternal night. Its new sovereign lives in the pyramid city at the foot of the highest volcano. I don't know his name, but he must be a mighty creature to defeat the former sovereign Hades.”

“Hades?” Gene interjected, “Funny. My father found a kitten and named it Hades.”

Raphael grinned craftily. “I doubt this Pandemonium used to be ruled by a kitten,” he snickered. Gene chuckled and comfortably leaned against a rock. “Probably not,” he agreed.

“Anyhow,” Raphael continued, “I thought you might want to see that pyramid city. So let's explore this world together and decide if this is a place for us.”

Gene agreed. Their adventure wasn't over yet.

Vast as Worlds

Today I want to talk about an important aspect of writing -- the world your characters are inhabiting.
It is not only part of the setting, but where your story takes place can also influence the characters' behaviour and -- utlimately -- the plot itself.

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Worldbuilding is way more than mere mapping. It includes many aspects such as culture, lore and languages. Especially for fantasy/scifi stories worldbuilding is essential. Still, if you decide to use the 'real world' as setting, you have to keep all of these things in mind.
Imagine your story takes place in, let's say, Italy. It would be very strange if your characters  -- Italians -- had Finnish names or German traditions or lived in cities which reminded you of ancient Chinese architecture. Think about this beforehand, and be dedicated to whatever you decide.

This is even more important when you make up your own world like I did with my 'Neverbeen Universe'. Surely, the readers won't know exactly how it is supposed to be in this world. But they will catch on to things that make no sense or are confusing. So it is important to be stringent with yourself and with your world. Think about the different people who live there.
How are they governed? Do they remind you of real people in their mannerisms? What are their traditions and values? What do they believe in? What about sports, art or food?
These are just a few questions you should be able to answer.

In Neverbeen Universe there are a lot of different people and creatures. For example, there are the Waterfairies. They are a deeply religious and traditionally rooted people who live in Waterfairy Kingdom. Their capital Yponerotis is a megacity larger than Tokyo and it is both ashore and under the sea. While they are very traditional a people, Waterfairies are very advanced in medicine and healing magic. Their motto is 'panta rhei' -- everything flows. And like the waters, they believe they can always find a way to solve issues. Altough they have ongoing feuds with other fairy people, they are very helpful towards any creature in need. Their religion is centered around a waterdeity, who occasionaly helps heal people at the Healing Academy of Yponerotis. The Academy building is a masterpiece of architectural art. As the Waterfairy country is a kingdom, they have an absolutistically ruling dynasty -- the di Kuningas -- and the Waterfairies would always follow their lead, even if it led away from their traditional paths. They usually have more than one first name and the naming pattern is something between Icelandic and Japanese. Their life expectancy is a few thousand years...

Now this is only one people living in Neverbeen Universe. And -- like the name suggests -- Neverbeen Universe is more than just one world. There is Earth -- a lot of my short stories take place in the fictional city of Thuddington -- and there are other planets connected to it via magical portals; they belong to Thisside, but there are also Heaven and Hell, which are vast and complex realms of their own, belonging to the Otherside.

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You see, I spent more than a decade building this universe and it still grows and thrives. Of course you don't have to wait for ten years until your world is finished and you can start writing.
But you should take time to get to know your world, to explore the places your characters inhabit and to build this world until it fits. You'll soon experience that writing becomes a lot easier if you not only know your characters by heart but also take like a fish to the sea in the world you created for them.